POOR DAD
. by:TIANA B.
so much depends on the daocoters
poor dad poor dad.
his sikines has been fighing him for many
years nobody can sovle it.
Why did it all start siknes on my birtday.
nobody can sovle his rare deise nobody can sovle
nobody can sovle it.nobody can sovle it
Comments (5)
June Shanahan said
at 10:45 am on Jan 6, 2011
My heart is breaking, and my eyes are filled with tears. Your words are POWERFUL. We love your family.
troyscobee said
at 10:53 am on Jan 6, 2011
you are very brave tiana for sharing that with the class
claudiascobee said
at 10:28 am on Jan 7, 2011
I fell so bad 4 your daddy, but the poem is soooooooooo good!!!
alexandriascobee said
at 10:30 am on Jan 7, 2011
Tiana, you have TONS and TONS of voice, and a lot of courage to share this with the class. Great job!
caitlinscobee said
at 10:46 am on Jan 7, 2011
So sad. I started to cry.
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