Love ones
By Sarah R
So much depends
On the love you
Have for a love
One
Like your Grandma or your Grandpa or your mom or dad
Or any one in your family
You never no how much you love or miss then till there gone forever
So take time with all your love
Because you never know when its there last day.
I have had a Difficult time with this but I am thankful that I have all my friends helping me so much and I thank then for that.
Comments (8)
rachelscobee said
at 10:34 am on Jan 6, 2011
gmas and gpas are cool
alexandriascobee said
at 10:38 am on Jan 6, 2011
You are soo right! This is a really great poem Sarah!
June Shanahan said
at 5:37 pm on Jan 6, 2011
Sarah,
I knew you would have a hard time writing these words, but just like Jack, you braved your way to the other side of it. Doesn't writing help sometimes? Brave, brave, brave...that's what you are.
rachelscobee said
at 10:23 am on Jan 7, 2011
YAY ME!
indirascobee said
at 10:31 am on Jan 7, 2011
I was super afraid that my gpas or gmas will you know... dead.
caitlinscobee said
at 10:31 am on Jan 7, 2011
I am so glad to be your friend, Sarah! Everyone is my friend.
tianascobee said
at 10:32 am on Jan 7, 2011
OH MY GOSH thats a wondreful story i love how you say the people that tou care about and who love. That is pwoerful voice.
jacobscobee said
at 10:42 am on Jan 7, 2011
i like when you tell the reader to spend time with your family till ther last day!
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