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Rachel

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Candle Light

By: Rachel H.

 

So much depends

On the candle light,

In the middle of the night.

 

With that light I study

For my tests

And read when I'm not suppose to,

(SHHHHHH don't tell my mom)

 

So much depends

On the candle light,

In the middle of the night.  

 

Comments (12)

rossscobee said

at 10:28 am on Jan 6, 2011

This has to be one of the best poems i've ever seen! :) Great job (:

rachelscobee said

at 10:30 am on Jan 6, 2011

ありがとうございます

alexandriascobee said

at 10:31 am on Jan 6, 2011

I LOVE you poem Rachel! You write with great expression!

rachelscobee said

at 10:33 am on Jan 6, 2011

ありがとうございます

sarah1scobee said

at 10:34 am on Jan 6, 2011

I love your Voice Rachel!!!!

rachelscobee said

at 10:37 am on Jan 6, 2011

ありがとうございます

June Shanahan said

at 10:53 am on Jan 6, 2011

Seriously, I am loving that poem about sneaking books in the middle of the night. Love it!

rachelscobee said

at 10:26 am on Jan 7, 2011

ありがとうございます

galileascobee said

at 10:28 am on Jan 7, 2011

OMG Rachel i looooooooooooooooooooooooooooove your poem i think it was funny when you said "shhhh don't tell my mom!

davidscobee said

at 10:32 am on Jan 7, 2011

I like the part of shh don't tell my mom and the sneaking books part too

indirascobee said

at 10:41 am on Jan 7, 2011

I love it because it rhymes and the part "shhh don't tell my mom" I was laughing too hard :D

jacobscobee said

at 10:52 am on Jan 7, 2011

i loved the rymeing great expresion

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