By: Noel T.
So much depends
upon,
a young child sob-sob sobbing
for the loss of his family,
with a broken heart.
By: Noel T.
So much depends,
upon,
a sorrowful ghost,
longing to see it's living family.
By: Noel T.
So much depends,
upon,
a yowling cat,
screaming in the cold, cold, winter wind.
By: Noel T.
So much depends,
upon,
a young child,
wondering why,
pondering how,
his parents died,
and
he just cries,
cries, why did they die...?
By: Noel T.
So much depends,
upon,
a golden light,
leading the way,
through the sorrowful night.
By: Noel T.
So much depends,
upon,
a young child,
a young child whos lost,
lost in his way,
lost without his parents,
without his family,
he sad, sadder,
sad as can be.
By: Noel T.
So much depends,
upon,
a freezing dog,
shivering in the ice,
wondering why,
wondering why,
they abandoned him.
By: Noel T.
So much depends,
upon,
a sad, sad, child,
screaming at the world,
hating it,
fearing it,
oh why,
why did they die...?
Noel T.
For, nothing,
everything has come,
for no one shall see the sun,
we all cry, because our relatives die,
and that isn't very fun.
Noel T.
(note from the author)
I must stop writing sad poems,
it makes me wish many things,
sad things, happy things,
but all are all the same,
it makes me feel like no one has came,
No one has came is all the same,
for happiness is dread,
when you start to think you have read,
this isnt good at all,
for all of these poems are small,
i feel as if no one cares about me,
for sadness is all around thee.
(told from the point of a horrible wizard)
Noel T.
No one is nothing,
No one hates thy soul,
for if thee did they are a troll,
It may seem funny at first,
but let me tell you about my thirst,
i will not stop for any of that glop,
so you better get out of my way.
Comments (15)
rachelscobee said
at 10:26 am on Jan 6, 2011
:'( i dont like it when little kids cry :'(
noelscobee said
at 10:43 am on Jan 6, 2011
i know, it is sad!
sarah1scobee said
at 10:40 am on Jan 6, 2011
You Have a ton of voice Noel I love it!!!!!
June Shanahan said
at 5:42 pm on Jan 6, 2011
Voice, voice, voice...you have wonderful voice. You should write a book, book, BOOK!
rossscobee said
at 10:23 am on Jan 7, 2011
):You have lots of voice, it makes me sad. :(
indirascobee said
at 10:26 am on Jan 7, 2011
I felt so sad at youre poem! how do you add emotions on your poem?!
noelscobee said
at 10:30 am on Jan 7, 2011
Well, you do a great job of it, but how i do it, well, is i turn all my bad anger/ extreme fear/sadness, then i turn it into good energy like this poem!
patrickscobee said
at 10:28 am on Jan 7, 2011
You wrote alot and i like every one
caitlinscobee said
at 10:28 am on Jan 7, 2011
A yowing cat! That poem was my favorite.
darynscobee said
at 10:28 am on Jan 7, 2011
Wow...this is deep. Some of them I can't even explain. Lots and LOTS of voice
noelscobee said
at 10:29 am on Jan 7, 2011
ya, thx, but i dont think that i should write any more sad poetry! im sad now!
jacobscobee said
at 10:31 am on Jan 7, 2011
noel i loved the expresion in the writeing!
alexandriascobee said
at 10:33 am on Jan 7, 2011
Noel, you have written tons of AWESOME poems! They all have really powerful words, and you have great voice. Are you going to write more?
davidscobee said
at 10:51 am on Jan 7, 2011
noel your poem are good and mrs. shanahan is right you should make a book
elizabethscobee said
at 10:51 am on Jan 7, 2011
oh my gosh that was AMAZING Noel i love it
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