What can I do to help that dog
By Jake.w
A dog is a pet like a cat and a rabbit
But there not as great as a dog.
Even though there smart, fast, and gental
But there not as great as a dog.
Because a dog is much more protective,
Playful, fast and inteligent.
A dog is the most popular pet in the world and have
a more cleaner mouth than a cat and a rabitt.
Comments (8)
June Shanahan said
at 5:43 pm on Jan 6, 2011
We have THREE dogs, and TWO cats. I don't know which one I love the most, but I do know I sure do love your WRITING!!!!!
indirascobee said
at 10:24 am on Jan 7, 2011
wow, me too! i love dogs more than any animals!
patrickscobee said
at 10:26 am on Jan 7, 2011
Ha Ha I like the part about the mouth and the dog
caitlinscobee said
at 10:26 am on Jan 7, 2011
Wow! Dogs are smarter than cats, but I like both.
sanjanascobee said
at 10:29 am on Jan 7, 2011
All that you said about dogs is TOTALLY true! Hey Jake, do you actually HAVE a dog yourself? Your words are so powerful, I want to go down to the animal shelter RIGHT NOW! :)
conradscobee said
at 10:29 am on Jan 7, 2011
I like your poem it`s realy good .
davidscobee said
at 10:38 am on Jan 7, 2011
Jake that was an awesome poem and I like dogs more too than cats
elizabethscobee said
at 10:49 am on Jan 7, 2011
that was AWSOME great voice
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