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Daryn

Page history last edited by darynscobee 13 years, 1 month ago

 

Certain Cinderella 

By Daryn C. (a.k.a Giggles)

So much depends on some kind of Cinderella,

Living in her topsy-turvy fairytale.

So much depends on a certain Cinderella,with that missing glass slipper.

Hey,there,Prince Charming!

Don't you dare miss her

 

 

 

Comments (26)

sarah1scobee said

at 10:37 am on Jan 6, 2011

You Have So much Voice Giggles

darynscobee said

at 8:54 pm on Jan 6, 2011

Thanks,Sarah. You have helped so much in getting me through this. You have been there 100% of the time to give me hugs and words ofadvice when I need it. THANK YOU!!!!!

darynscobee said

at 8:55 pm on Jan 6, 2011

Sorry, I meant of advice,I sorta skipped out on the spacebar,huh? hahahaha

patrickscobee said

at 10:38 am on Jan 6, 2011

Wow thats so awesome daryn i can tell that really comess from the heart

darynscobee said

at 8:52 pm on Jan 6, 2011

Thanks,I really appriciate it. It's nice to have all my close friends saying all these nice things :D

rachelscobee said

at 10:39 am on Jan 6, 2011

Usted sabe mejor que nadie Daryn

darynscobee said

at 8:51 pm on Jan 6, 2011

I have positivley no idea what that says,but if I did,I'm sure I would be saying!!!!!!!! :D

sanjanascobee said

at 10:40 am on Jan 6, 2011

I know you're writing that from experience, Giggles... Your story REALLY came from your heart!

darynscobee said

at 8:50 pm on Jan 6, 2011

Thanks,Sanjana!!!! I know it may seem like I'm repeating the same thing ("wow that means so much to me") but I honestly mean it. Thanks sooooo much (again)!!!!!!!!

alexandriascobee said

at 10:41 am on Jan 6, 2011

Daryn, this has TONS of voice and one of the best poems I have ever read!

darynscobee said

at 8:47 pm on Jan 6, 2011

OMG Alex,your going to make me cry (Happy tears, happytears) those words mean more than you can imagine. You're a GREAT friend

June Shanahan said

at 10:44 am on Jan 6, 2011

I know better than to think 10 year olds do not have meaningful and deep thoughts, Giggles. Your words cut to the heart, and I mean that as a compliment.

darynscobee said

at 8:46 pm on Jan 6, 2011

Mrs.S,
Coming from you,that means so much. Writing these poems was the perfect way to express how I feel,when at first I couldn't figure out exactly what words could describe what I was going through. But this was the perfect opportunity to let what I was feeling be heard...or seen,considering it's on a computer screen hahahahahaha

June Shanahan said

at 3:43 pm on Jan 9, 2011

It's all because of Sharon Creech's gifted way of writing.

salvadorscobee said

at 10:49 am on Jan 6, 2011

que es triste Daryn
you know what i mean

darynscobee said

at 8:41 pm on Jan 6, 2011

Thank you so much,Sal!!!!! That one I know is Spanish...or at least I'm pretty sure hahaha thanks again!!!!!!! :D

rossscobee said

at 10:53 am on Jan 6, 2011

Impressionante, che è davvero grande

Awesome, That is really great

darynscobee said

at 8:40 pm on Jan 6, 2011

Thanks for the.....okay I don't know what language that is,but thanks anyway hahahahaha

galileascobee said

at 10:27 am on Jan 7, 2011

Daryn you put sooooooooo much voice into your poem and think of it like this
"your one heartbreak closer to the perfect match"

darynscobee said

at 10:30 am on Jan 7, 2011

Awwwww Thank you so much,G. That means the world to me. But I guess you're right. He just wasn't the one for me

tianascobee said

at 10:37 am on Jan 7, 2011

at first i thougt that was sharon creeth thats amazing thats how i feel. you let out a lot of your feelings.

darynscobee said

at 10:40 am on Jan 7, 2011

Awwww thank you!!!! Everyone is being so nice,caring and comforting about what happened. I really appriciate it. THANKS!!!!!

claudiascobee said

at 10:54 am on Jan 7, 2011

I love your poem soooooooooooo much it so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

darynscobee said

at 4:44 pm on Jan 7, 2011

Thanks,Winkie!!!!! (hahahahaha). Coming from you comforts and helps me so much more

darynscobee said

at 6:07 pm on Jan 7, 2011

I forgot the "that" it was supposed to say "coming from you,that comforts and helps me so much more" hahahahahaha typo

claudiascobee said

at 1:06 am on Jan 9, 2011

OMG!!!! I love how you changed it also I know it is kinda late but at like 1:00 pm can you call me PLEASE IT IS SUPER IMPORTENT(!!-=08@#$*%$&*(#$@%#%#%^*(&%$@!$^*())(*&^%#@!@%^*
That important

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