(Dog in Disguise)
Puppy Love
So much depends on puppy love, you hope off that big yellow bus and walk in the door. ''Here boy!'' you say as a fluffy white dog runs in your arms. Then he freezes and looks at you like your guilty of murder. He falls and goes into a deep sleep that will never end.
God Loves Me
Everyone is different, as you see.
But God loves you,
and God loves me!
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Comments (7)
June Shanahan said
at 10:34 am on Jan 6, 2011
Your words are so powerful, Blinky.
patrickscobee said
at 10:36 am on Jan 6, 2011
Wow that had a lot of voice great job
elizabethscobee said
at 10:41 am on Jan 6, 2011
tHAT WAS REALLY AMAZING MY EYES JUST POPED WHEN I WAS READING THE END!
Christine Bonilla said
at 10:49 am on Jan 6, 2011
That was s very strong ending. I loved the words you used to describe.
troyscobee said
at 10:50 am on Jan 6, 2011
great poem catlin that was very deep and exsperesive
indirascobee said
at 10:51 am on Jan 6, 2011
I hope dogs don't die.Honestly I feel the exact same feeling like you.
tianascobee said
at 10:44 am on Jan 7, 2011
omg that is a sad sad sad story u have ton tona ton a voice
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