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Unique, adventurous, funny, loving
Sister of Jacob and Aspen,
Lover of dogs, chimpanzees, and family,
Who feels happy when she is with her family, and plays with her puppy,
Sad when she sees a dead animal, or an animal is lost,
Who feels scared when home alone and when she sees a scorpion,
Who needs help with language arts,
Who is thankful for being healthy, having a house, and having a family that cares,
Who fears spiders, snakes, scorpions,
Who dreams of becoming a zoo keeper, or a Special Ed teacher,
Resident of Helotes, TX.
Very dirty room (gross)
By: Maddie W.
Green goo on the dresser
Empty pudding cups on the ground
Socks on the lamp
Ants crawling everywhere
Something moving under a dirty clothes pile
Chewed gum on the hair brush
A HUGE ball of dog hair laying on the desk
3 moths on the ceiling
Melted crayons on the carpet
Then suddenly something roared
My friend walked in saying “like my room?”
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Desteni Hooker
Jane Goodall
Katy Perry
Zendaya
 
All I see is signs
all alla
see is dolla signs!
  
   
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Comments (20)
Laffy Taffy said
at 5:12 pm on Sep 28, 2012
I really like yours, Maddie! Don't be alarmed, I was in Mrs. Shanahan's class last year! You can find MY All About Me by clicking Wiki #3 on the side bar, then clicking 21! Now, about your poem. Are you missing any punctuation marks? Do you have any unneeded capitalization? And what's the COOLLOGO.COM FREE LOGO DESIGN and the flamingtext.com for? If you can answer, I'm sure Mrs. Shanahan would be interested to know, too.
June Shanahan said
at 8:04 pm on Sep 28, 2012
Laffy Taffy,
Please come to my school, sit at my desk, and um....be the teacher. I miss you. Keep helping me!!! I love it!!!!
Laffy Taffy said
at 8:07 pm on Sep 28, 2012
I SO SO would if I could! That's what this wiki is for, so I can be your one and only co-teacher!
June Shanahan said
at 8:16 pm on Sep 28, 2012
Do I have to pay you? How much? A million dollars? Hmmm...
Christine Bonilla said
at 7:32 pm on Oct 3, 2012
Remember Maddie, if you make flaming text or a cool logo, you have to download it to your computer and save. Then, upload it to the wiki using the images and files tab, THEN insert it. It doesn't work to copy/ paste!! I'm watching you!
June Shanahan said
at 7:34 pm on Oct 3, 2012
I love you! :-D
Maddie said
at 12:07 pm on Oct 25, 2012
SORRY. :D
Maddie said
at 12:19 pm on Oct 25, 2012
Flaming text dosent work you have to be a member!!!!! :(
Jessica said
at 9:08 am on Mar 4, 2013
I did'nt get that part where you said" who feels scared when home alone , she sees scorpions".
But your job that you wanted to do was so cool where did you even come up with that idea?
Nia said
at 9:11 am on Mar 4, 2013
That's so coold that you wnt to be a zoo keeper or a special Ed teacher.
Jada said
at 9:18 am on Mar 4, 2013
Make sure you read over it, but other than that it's great. :P
Emily said
at 9:23 am on Mar 4, 2013
Chimpanzees are cool. They are one of my favorite animals.
Keep following your dreams.
Line "Who Feels happy" should have the word is between she and with. Rock on!!! ....... and keep up the good work.
Mackenzie said
at 9:31 am on Mar 4, 2013
We'er so much alike, I LOVE chimpanzees.
Maddie said
at 10:37 am on Mar 6, 2013
thank you
June Shanahan said
at 4:50 pm on Mar 6, 2013
All About Me Poem - 100%
Love it, adore it! You're teaching the world how to write better with your powerful words!!!!
Tommy said
at 9:46 am on Mar 7, 2013
I have 3 tickets to the zoo!
Maddie said
at 9:59 am on Mar 7, 2013
Thank You!
June Shanahan said
at 10:44 am on Apr 21, 2013
Maddie,
I love your Dirty Room poetry so much! Will you read it for the whole world? Um...I mean, will you read it for the WHOLE SCHOOL?!
June Shanahan said
at 4:19 pm on Apr 21, 2013
Spelling suggestions:
clouthes (no), clothes (yes)
celling (no), ceiling (yes)
Thank you, thank you, thank you for saying yes to the poetry reading invitation. :-)
Maddie said
at 1:14 pm on Apr 23, 2013
Thank you for telling me.
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