Intelligent, energetic, comedic, independent,
Brother of Kiley,
Lover of Big Blue and dinosaurs,
Who feels happy when he goes on vacation and gets a new game,
Sad when he gets a bad grade,
Who feels scared of getting lost, bears.
Who needs help in writing,
Who is thankful for my parents for food, shelter, goods,
Who fears wolves, death, venomous snakes.
Who dreams of being a robot,
Resident of San Antonio, Texas.
Velociraptor
Deadly, Fierce, Quick, Old,
Cousin of Linheraptor ,
Lover of meat and the rocky deserts,
Who feels happy when he catches his prey,
Sad when one of his brothers die,
Who feels scared of predators,
Who needs help with catching large prey,
Who is thankful for my parents for teaching me to hunt,
Who fears Tyrannosaurs and allosaurs,
Who dreams of becoming gigantic,
Resident of the rocky deserts of central Asia.
Summer Reading
Alexander Graham Bell
Brilliant, Caring, Dedicated, Wondrous,
Husband of Mabel,
Lover of communication technology, and teaching the deaf,
Who felt happy when he created a functioning telephone,
Sad when his father died of tuberculosis,
Scared of losing his loved ones,
Who needed help perfecting his inventions,
Who is thankful for Thomas Edison for discovering electricity,
Who dreams of deaf people to easily communicate,
Resedent of Edinburgh, Scotland
Comments (27)
June Shanahan said
at 7:44 pm on Sep 27, 2012
Dear Jaden. Help me. I don't understand. What's Big Blue? A movie? A type of soda? A book? Help!
James said
at 9:20 am on Mar 8, 2013
Big Blue is a type of soda. Its basically the same thing as big red just big blue and it has a diffrent flavor.
Jaden said
at 10:53 am on Sep 28, 2012
Its lke big red but Blue and it taste better in my opinion also they don't sell it in very many places and i didn't wnat to put Lover of my family because that is kinda boring.
June Shanahan said
at 10:58 am on Sep 28, 2012
Thanks for making me smarter. This week-end, I'm going to go shopping...FOR BIG BLUE!!!!!
Rudy said
at 7:06 pm on Oct 25, 2012
I love big blue and I know what you mean by funny :)
Jaden said
at 6:00 pm on Nov 4, 2012
Just out of curiosity, why do you have two different names? Because on my report card it said Elizabeth but on mostly everything else it says June.
June Shanahan said
at 8:54 pm on Nov 5, 2012
Funny question, and I bet LOTS of people are wondering the same thing. Northside ISD will only put a teacher's first name on the report cards and email address. (elizabeth.shanahan@nisd.net) However, everybody throughout my entire life has always called me by my middle name, June. I like your questions. Keep asking them. :-)
Erin said
at 7:26 pm on Nov 13, 2012
Jaden, I hope you're not as hyper as Mrs. Shanahan! We both love watermelon! Haha. I hope yiu have a wonderful year with Mrs. Shanahan!
June Shanahan said
at 10:47 pm on Mar 1, 2013
You want to be a robot? You should talk with John because he wants to grow up and be an electrical engineer! You know what that means...
he could TURN YOU INTO A ROBOT!
P.S. Would you mind remaining a real kid until after 5th grade so I don't have to teach a robot?
Rudy said
at 9:06 am on Mar 4, 2013
Jaden i think you would be a very energetic robot. and if you really want to be a robot then you should get a little toy robot and study its mechanisms
Joshua said
at 9:17 am on Mar 4, 2013
Jaden lots of people are smart and you are very smart. And robots are smart are probobly as smart as you.
John said
at 9:18 am on Mar 4, 2013
Being a robot is some fancy dream you have there. You are so 21 centry. I love it! Bears wat a big fear. I would never go out side if I heard threre was a bear in my my town.
Faith said
at 9:28 am on Mar 4, 2013
It's soooooo not true that you need help in wrighting. And I can prove it with the wonderful poem you wrote!
James said
at 9:29 am on Mar 4, 2013
Thats so cool that you love dinos I would like them to if they didnt want to eat me.
Emily said
at 9:30 am on Mar 4, 2013
Jaden you are a words master! These words are just so great I can't even express the greatness of them.
Line "Who feels scared" instead of a comma I think you should put and.
On line "Who fears" wolfes should have a v instead of an f.
Jacob said
at 9:34 am on Mar 4, 2013
I hope your robot dream succedes and your sad when what. By the way whats big blue is it a color. How could could you fear of wolves there just big and deadly.
Jaden said
at 9:36 am on Mar 4, 2013
Big Blue is like Big Red but instead of red its blue
Jessica said
at 9:35 am on Mar 4, 2013
i olove your words they have so much meaning. Thanks GRAPE MAN!!!!!!;)
Mackenzie said
at 10:09 am on Mar 4, 2013
If you become a robot PLEASE!!!!! don't take over the world.
Douglas said
at 10:12 am on Mar 4, 2013
I can see you will be a robot.
Tommy said
at 9:39 am on Mar 7, 2013
But I love wolfs....... :[
June Shanahan said
at 4:02 am on Mar 8, 2013
I love your writing. :-) 100/A+
Jaden said
at 9:15 am on Mar 8, 2013
It looks much better now.
Rudy said
at 9:46 am on Mar 8, 2013
Nice dinosaur it must be hard to walk around with such a big head ;)
June Shanahan said
at 5:54 am on Mar 10, 2013
That velociraptor has extremely scary eyes. Yikes!
June Shanahan said
at 2:19 pm on Apr 6, 2013
Please add a link.
Emily said
at 12:44 pm on Apr 18, 2013
It is really cool that you picked an animal that someone wouldn't usually pick. Studying a Velociraptor can be a clue to solving questions that are confusing about our Earth.
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