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Ashleigh

Page history last edited by Ashleigh 10 years, 10 months ago

 summer reading  

 

                                                                                                                                                   

Funny, helpful, nice, respectful,

Youngest of 4 kids, Daughter of Patrica and Albert, she loves NATILE G, 

Lover of her Grandma, her family and sun flowers,

Who feels happy when she is with her mom and spends time with her grandma,

Sad when she is lonely, when family is sick,

Who feels scared of getting in trouble, getting very sick,

Who needs help to stop biting her finger nails,

Who gives thanks to the lord for my family, Friends and everything I have,

Who fears coyotes, cougars, and middle school,

Who dreams of becoming a fashion designer, teacher, dolphin trainer at sea world,

Resident of Helotes, TX.

 

 

 

 

 

                                                                                                                                                   

 

Sweet, Fluffy, Cuddly, Adorable,

Mother of black and white baby penguins,

Lover of, riding on ice, tobogganing, and swimming

Who feels happy when she catches fish, or swimming in the the water,

Sad when she's alone, or surrounded by unknown penguins,

Who feels scared of predators passing by, or a predator trying to eat her, 

Who needs help to train her baby penguins, and fighting predators

Who gives thanks to god for giving her fur,

Who fears Leopard Seals, Australian Sea Eagle, and the Suka,

Who dreams of have the whole entire ocean to herself,

Resident of Antarctica or Southern Part of the world

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  

Marie Curie

Smart, Scientific, Famous, Leader,

Mother of Irene and Eve,

Lover of Radium, her children, and her husband,

Who feels happy when she discovers something new like the X-Ray 

Sad when reminded of her death of her husband, and reminded of her home town ,

Who feels scared of letting down others, and her daughters to give up on what they believe,

Who needs help when doing a science experiment, and to take care of her children,

Who give thanks to god for giving her the passion of science, and her family,

Who fears of the world giving up on her beliefs,

Who dreams of the world having more inventions to use in the future,

          Former Resident of Warsaw, Poland

 

 

 

 

 

 

Selena Gomez

 

 

Taylor Swift

 

Bella Thorne

 

Zendaya

 

 

 

Ariana Grande

 

Katy perry

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                            Titanic                                                                                 My Future life page                    My Middel School projects

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Comments (30)

June Shanahan said

at 8:33 pm on Sep 28, 2012

I love getting to know you through the power of words. I didn't know you were a mamma's girl. Ha!

Ashleigh said

at 7:07 pm on Sep 30, 2012

mrs shanahan u make us a happy family P.S I love ur dresses

June Shanahan said

at 7:24 pm on Sep 30, 2012

Do you think I teach too fast? Do I walk too fast? Do I talk too fast? I'm glad you like my dresses. I will save my fancy ones for special days. Ashleigh, I like your shoes as much as you like my dresses. xoxoxoxo

Ashleigh said

at 7:08 pm on Sep 30, 2012

ya i am a mammas girl

Ashleigh said

at 7:27 pm on Sep 30, 2012

your questions remind me of hate that cat when jack says is he alive

Faith said

at 3:59 pm on Oct 1, 2012

Your making a connection Ashliegh!

Faith said

at 4:04 pm on Oct 1, 2012

Ashliegh, did u know that we have a volleyball player coming from O'conner today at practice?!

Faith said

at 4:05 pm on Oct 1, 2012

:)

Linda Hodgson said

at 9:00 pm on Oct 4, 2012

Hey Ashleigh, I thought you were a momma's girl when I saw the two of you together yesterday! How big is Payton now? I saw him when he was a puppy when I took August home one day. You are a special girl Ashleigh and I enjoy working with you. Ms. Linda x0x0x

Ashleigh said

at 4:44 pm on Oct 5, 2012

payton got big she love too play tug awar

Erin said

at 7:23 pm on Nov 13, 2012

Ashleigh, I'm very sorry to read about your sister :( , but your poem is very good! I hope you keep this amazing writing up! Have a good year with Mrs. Shanahan!

June Shanahan said

at 10:58 pm on Mar 1, 2013

Dear Ashleigh,
When you become a dolphin trainer, I am DEFINITELY coming to see you!

Nia said

at 9:29 am on Mar 4, 2013

I bet you would be an amaxing dolphin trainer.

Mackenzie said

at 9:15 am on Mar 4, 2013

Ashleigh, I love you poem it has voice. I'm comming with Mrs. Shanahan to see you.

Faith said

at 9:20 am on Mar 4, 2013

Ashleigh, I never new that you wanted to become a dolphin trainer! That's why I like your wrighting so much, because I can find out things that I never knew about you.

Maddie said

at 9:28 am on Mar 4, 2013

Your writing is packed tight with voice! I never knew you wanted to becomea dolphin trainer.

Jada said

at 9:30 am on Mar 4, 2013

Fashion designer it figuers your outfits are so fashionable and stylelish! WORK IT! WORK IT!

Maiya said

at 9:37 am on Mar 4, 2013

Ashleigh,
I fear of all the same things. Your poem has so much voice I L-O-V-E it!

June Shanahan said

at 7:37 pm on Mar 6, 2013

Dear Sweet Ashleigh,
Read your poem and find where you broke into the first person point of view. Change it to the third person. If you can't find it, ask Douglas to help you, or come and ask me for help.
Spelling: fashion designer (no caps)

Douglas said

at 7:40 pm on Mar 6, 2013

Ask me ask me!

June Shanahan said

at 7:41 pm on Mar 6, 2013

Douglas is EVERYWHERE!!!!

Douglas said

at 7:42 pm on Mar 6, 2013

I know right!

Tommy said

at 9:37 am on Mar 7, 2013

But I love coyotes.... :[

June Shanahan said

at 3:54 am on Mar 8, 2013

Please take out:

she loves NATILE G,

And add it to the next line, so it reads:

Lover of her Grandma, siblings, parents, and Natile G.,

June Shanahan said

at 3:55 am on Mar 8, 2013

Is Natile supposed to be spelled Natalie?

June Shanahan said

at 3:57 am on Mar 8, 2013

Change lord to Lord.
Change Friends to friends.
Change "I have" to "she has" or it will not be in the third person point of view.

June Shanahan said

at 3:56 am on Mar 8, 2013

If you use "me, me, me" or "I, I, I" you are writing from the first person point of view. We are writing from the third person, so that's why the "me" must go bye-bye.

June Shanahan said

at 3:59 am on Mar 8, 2013

Put the word "and" before middle school and put it again before dolphin trainer.
Capitalize Sea World.

Jada said

at 1:15 pm on Mar 10, 2013

How is your spring break?

June Shanahan said

at 2:18 pm on Apr 6, 2013

I love your poem, Ashleigh. Can you locate the two small mistakes in the following lines?

0Who fears Leopard Seals, Australian Sea Eagle, Suka,

Who dreams of living in a warmer place with her family,

Resident of Antarctica, southern part of the world

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