Jacob B
All About Me Poem
Funny, magical, brilliant, adventurous,
Father of no one yet,
Lover of family, pets, and centipedes,
Who feels happy when he gets a new pet and gets a good grade on a test,
Sad when pet dies, when gets a bad grade,
Who feels scared of heights, clowns, unicorns,
Who needs help when getting on roller coasters,
Who is thankful for pets, a life, and God who gave me a family,
Who fears STAAR, allot of homework, and vegetables,
Who dreams of being a snake and living in a Mystery Shack,
Resident of Helotes, Texas.
Summer Reading
Soccer and baseball with Doglas,Rudy,James
Centipede
Ferocios, deadly, pousionous, fierce,
Relitive of millipede,
Lover of babies, mice, and bugs,
Who feels happy when crawling at night and gets to catch food,
Sad when babies die and get eaten,
Who feels scared of toads, birds, and snakes,
Who needs help when finding food alone,
Who is thankful for entinas that help me see and find food,
Who fears extinction, birds, and dying,
Who dreams of a lizard buffet,
Resident of North America, Europe, Asia, Austrailia, Africa, and central South America.
Eli Whitney Poem
Brilliant, creative, tinker, caring,
Father of Eli III, Frances, Elizabeth, and Susan,
Lover of children, tools, mechanics, and machines,
Who was left home once while he took apart his fathers watch and put it back together,
Who feels happy when making nails, violins, and men's walking sticks,
Sad when an experament test fails and gets hurt while testing,
Who fears killing himself in an experament and losing his children,
Most famous for inventing the Cotton Gin,
Who needs help when can't figure out something,
Who is thankful for children and wife and being able to Produce 50lbs of cotton a day instead of 5lbs,
Who invented a violin at the age of 12,
Who felt scared of not learning enough before graduating,
Who dreamed of helping the world by his inventions,
Resident of Westboro, Massachusetts.
Comments (25)
Jacob said
at 4:46 pm on Sep 27, 2012
Hi mrs. shanahan ime Awesome and i am so hooked on to my book i cant stop reading it!! :)
June Shanahan said
at 7:12 pm on Sep 27, 2012
You are my Einstein.
June Shanahan said
at 10:32 pm on Mar 1, 2013
You dream of being a snake? Oh Mr. You-Know-Who is going to love that! (Jack, the snake expert.)
P.S. Your words have power. I love your writing, Douglas.
James said
at 9:07 am on Mar 4, 2013
Ok good I thought that you ment Voldermort.
P.S. Now i know it's Jack.
Tommy said
at 9:09 am on Mar 4, 2013
Jacob clowns are not scary, there creepy. And just focos to get a 100/A+
Rudy said
at 9:15 am on Mar 4, 2013
I order to be afraid of clowns you have to actually look at a clown. If you want to be a snake then take some expert lessons from you know who (Jack the snake guy).
Joshua said
at 9:22 am on Mar 4, 2013
Lots of people are afraid of clowns and Jacob has the guts to defeat them.
Maiya said
at 9:28 am on Mar 4, 2013
Jacob,
If you like centipedes you should try the jelly beans that taste like centipedes. They are sooooo G-R-O-S-S!!!!!!!!
Douglas said
at 9:29 am on Mar 4, 2013
Everyone wants to be a snake, mostly Jack.
June Shanahan said
at 9:33 am on Mar 4, 2013
Everybody? Count me out. I have never, ever wanted to be a snake, or any reptile for that matter.
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Jaden said
at 9:33 am on Mar 4, 2013
You fear vegetables? Thats crazy! Also i can definatly relate to getting on a rollercoaters!
Ashleigh said
at 9:34 am on Mar 4, 2013
Jacob I'm begging you if you turn into a snake please dont eat me! Also I fear STAAR to but, we will make . One more thing jabob show some voice in your poem that would be great!
John said
at 9:37 am on Mar 4, 2013
I think that being a snake would really puff up Jack if you haven't noticed.
June Shanahan said
at 8:07 pm on Mar 6, 2013
Wait, wait, wait...you fear vegetables? Stay away from the Root Viewer! It has carrots, radishes, and onions in it!!! They're ALIVE!
Jacob said
at 9:25 am on Mar 7, 2013
Everyone knows that Jack came up with the word swagmagical Im giving Jack creddit. He made me
June Shanahan said
at 1:56 pm on Apr 6, 2013
Dear Jacob,
You have a spelling mistake in your centipede poetry. To find it, click edit, then click on the blue check mark spell check tool. Did you find it?
June Shanahan said
at 8:28 pm on Apr 11, 2013
Dear Jacob,
You were writing your centipede poem from the third person point of view and then SUDDENLY you switched into the first person point of view. Here's where you suddenly changed:
Sad when my babies die and I get eaten,
Do you know how to fix it so it is third person like the rest of your poem? If not, raise your hand and I will help.
Hint: When I see the word "I" it is first person.
Tommy said
at 12:41 pm on Apr 17, 2013
Jacob be carful, if we all turn into our animals, watch out for Jack, Dun Dun Dun!
Ashleigh said
at 12:51 pm on Apr 17, 2013
Jacob I feeel like I know so much about Centipedes. Thanks for teaching me.
Emily said
at 12:50 pm on Apr 18, 2013
I can really imagine you putting "lizzard buffet" up there.
How do you feel around centipedes? (I am a little terrified of them.)
If you have a centipede for a pet some day, he will love you that you wrote a poem about him.
Jacob said
at 9:44 am on Apr 30, 2013
on summer reading I ment my name to be awesome pants instead of awesome pans:)
June Shanahan said
at 9:24 am on May 22, 2013
I love your Eli Whitney poem so far. Make sure you check your spelling.
Tommy said
at 9:26 am on May 22, 2013
The cotton gin is a very important inventon. I wonder how he got the idea?
Jacob said
at 9:36 am on May 22, 2013
Well he was thinking one day about how you could only make 5 pounds of cotton a day so he invinted the cotton gin and it made 50 pounds of cotton a day!!
Joshua said
at 9:53 am on May 22, 2013
i cant believe he invented the cottonjin.
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