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Jacob B

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Jacob B

All About Me Poem

 

Funny, magical, brilliant, adventurous,

Father of no one yet,

Lover of family, pets, and centipedes,

Who feels happy when he gets a new pet and gets a good grade on a test,

Sad when pet dies, when gets a bad grade,

Who feels scared of heights, clowns, unicorns,

Who needs help when getting on roller coasters,

Who is thankful for pets, a life, and God who gave me a family,

Who fears STAAR, allot of homework, and vegetables,

Who dreams of being a snake and living in a Mystery Shack,

Resident of Helotes, Texas.

 

Summer Reading

 

Soccer and baseball with Doglas,Rudy,James 

Centipede

 

 

Ferocios, deadly, pousionous, fierce,

Relitive of millipede,

Lover of babies, mice, and bugs,

Who feels happy when crawling at night and gets to catch food,

Sad when babies die and get eaten,

Who feels scared of toads, birds, and snakes,

Who needs help when finding food alone,

Who is thankful for entinas that help me see and find food,

Who fears extinction, birds, and dying,

Who dreams of a lizard buffet,

Resident of North America, Europe, Asia, Austrailia, Africa, and central South America.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Eli Whitney Poem

 

 Brilliant, creative, tinker, caring,

Father of Eli III, Frances, Elizabeth, and Susan,

Lover of children, tools, mechanics, and machines,

Who was left home once while he took apart his fathers watch and put it back together,

Who feels happy when making nails, violins, and men's walking sticks,

Sad when an experament test fails and gets hurt while testing,  

Who fears killing himself in an experament and losing his children,

Most famous for  inventing the Cotton Gin,

Who needs help when can't figure out something,

Who is thankful for children and wife and being able to Produce 50lbs of cotton a day instead of 5lbs,

Who invented a violin at the age of 12,

Who felt scared of not learning enough before graduating,

Who dreamed of helping the world by his inventions,

Resident of Westboro, Massachusetts. 

 

 

  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

   

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                                                                

                                                            

                                                                

                                                                   

                                                                 

                                                        

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Comments (25)

Jacob said

at 4:46 pm on Sep 27, 2012

Hi mrs. shanahan ime Awesome and i am so hooked on to my book i cant stop reading it!! :)

June Shanahan said

at 7:12 pm on Sep 27, 2012

You are my Einstein.

June Shanahan said

at 10:32 pm on Mar 1, 2013

You dream of being a snake? Oh Mr. You-Know-Who is going to love that! (Jack, the snake expert.)
P.S. Your words have power. I love your writing, Douglas.

James said

at 9:07 am on Mar 4, 2013

Ok good I thought that you ment Voldermort.
P.S. Now i know it's Jack.

Tommy said

at 9:09 am on Mar 4, 2013

Jacob clowns are not scary, there creepy. And just focos to get a 100/A+

Rudy said

at 9:15 am on Mar 4, 2013

I order to be afraid of clowns you have to actually look at a clown. If you want to be a snake then take some expert lessons from you know who (Jack the snake guy).

Joshua said

at 9:22 am on Mar 4, 2013

Lots of people are afraid of clowns and Jacob has the guts to defeat them.

Maiya said

at 9:28 am on Mar 4, 2013

Jacob,
If you like centipedes you should try the jelly beans that taste like centipedes. They are sooooo G-R-O-S-S!!!!!!!!

Douglas said

at 9:29 am on Mar 4, 2013

Everyone wants to be a snake, mostly Jack.

June Shanahan said

at 9:33 am on Mar 4, 2013

Everybody? Count me out. I have never, ever wanted to be a snake, or any reptile for that matter.
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Jaden said

at 9:33 am on Mar 4, 2013

You fear vegetables? Thats crazy! Also i can definatly relate to getting on a rollercoaters!

Ashleigh said

at 9:34 am on Mar 4, 2013

Jacob I'm begging you if you turn into a snake please dont eat me! Also I fear STAAR to but, we will make . One more thing jabob show some voice in your poem that would be great!

John said

at 9:37 am on Mar 4, 2013

I think that being a snake would really puff up Jack if you haven't noticed.

June Shanahan said

at 8:07 pm on Mar 6, 2013

Wait, wait, wait...you fear vegetables? Stay away from the Root Viewer! It has carrots, radishes, and onions in it!!! They're ALIVE!

Jacob said

at 9:25 am on Mar 7, 2013

Everyone knows that Jack came up with the word swagmagical Im giving Jack creddit. He made me

June Shanahan said

at 1:56 pm on Apr 6, 2013

Dear Jacob,
You have a spelling mistake in your centipede poetry. To find it, click edit, then click on the blue check mark spell check tool. Did you find it?

June Shanahan said

at 8:28 pm on Apr 11, 2013

Dear Jacob,
You were writing your centipede poem from the third person point of view and then SUDDENLY you switched into the first person point of view. Here's where you suddenly changed:
Sad when my babies die and I get eaten,

Do you know how to fix it so it is third person like the rest of your poem? If not, raise your hand and I will help.
Hint: When I see the word "I" it is first person.

Tommy said

at 12:41 pm on Apr 17, 2013

Jacob be carful, if we all turn into our animals, watch out for Jack, Dun Dun Dun!

Ashleigh said

at 12:51 pm on Apr 17, 2013

Jacob I feeel like I know so much about Centipedes. Thanks for teaching me.

Emily said

at 12:50 pm on Apr 18, 2013

I can really imagine you putting "lizzard buffet" up there.
How do you feel around centipedes? (I am a little terrified of them.)
If you have a centipede for a pet some day, he will love you that you wrote a poem about him.

Jacob said

at 9:44 am on Apr 30, 2013

on summer reading I ment my name to be awesome pants instead of awesome pans:)

June Shanahan said

at 9:24 am on May 22, 2013

I love your Eli Whitney poem so far. Make sure you check your spelling.

Tommy said

at 9:26 am on May 22, 2013

The cotton gin is a very important inventon. I wonder how he got the idea?

Jacob said

at 9:36 am on May 22, 2013

Well he was thinking one day about how you could only make 5 pounds of cotton a day so he invinted the cotton gin and it made 50 pounds of cotton a day!!

Joshua said

at 9:53 am on May 22, 2013

i cant believe he invented the cottonjin.

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