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Emotions

By Sal

So Much depends upon our emotions,

Emotions come from the heart of our soul,

Bravery, Rising to conquer all,

Courage, Giving us strength,

Love, Blinding us of all,

These are just three,

But there are many more,

But as there being good emotions there are bad emotions,

Panic, Scarring us with it’s cruel images,

Fear, Gripping us with it’s icy grip,

Pain, Stabbing us with it’s knife,

                                                                       And that is why emotions are important

 

Comments (10)

sarah1scobee said

at 10:43 am on Jan 6, 2011

You have so much voice Sal I love it!!!!!

salvadorscobee said

at 10:45 am on Jan 6, 2011

Thanks sarah that means alot!

June Shanahan said

at 10:49 am on Jan 6, 2011

Love your words, love your thoughts, love your heartfelt poetry.

alexandriascobee said

at 10:49 am on Jan 6, 2011

This is a GREAT poem Sal! You have great voice and the words are REALLY POWERFUL!

salvadorscobee said

at 10:52 am on Jan 6, 2011

gracias a todos lo que significa un montón! mi mamá dice que tengo un regalo cuando se trata de palabras. usted pensaba que sabía todo sobre mí, pero en realidad usted sabe sólo la mitad!

(thanks everyone that means a whole lot! my mom says that i have a gift when it comes to words. you thought you knew everything about me but really you only know half!)

rachelscobee said

at 10:54 am on Jan 6, 2011

Creo que las emociones diferentes son impresionantes

translation
I think that different emotions are awesome

davidscobee said

at 10:29 am on Jan 7, 2011

sal you have amazing voice in your poem and that's what makes it areally good one

salvadorscobee said

at 10:30 am on Jan 7, 2011

thank you!

alexandriascobee said

at 10:42 am on Jan 7, 2011

Your voice really shows through this poem! Its really good!

indirascobee said

at 10:44 am on Jan 7, 2011

WOW... Too many deep words! ARE YOU WALTER DEAN MYERS DIGUISED AS A 5TH GRADE BOY?!

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