Certain Cinderella
By Daryn C. (a.k.a Giggles)
So much depends on some kind of Cinderella,
Living in her topsy-turvy fairytale.
So much depends on a certain Cinderella,with that missing glass slipper.
Hey,there,Prince Charming!
Don't you dare miss her
Comments (26)
sarah1scobee said
at 10:37 am on Jan 6, 2011
You Have So much Voice Giggles
darynscobee said
at 8:54 pm on Jan 6, 2011
Thanks,Sarah. You have helped so much in getting me through this. You have been there 100% of the time to give me hugs and words ofadvice when I need it. THANK YOU!!!!!
darynscobee said
at 8:55 pm on Jan 6, 2011
Sorry, I meant of advice,I sorta skipped out on the spacebar,huh? hahahaha
patrickscobee said
at 10:38 am on Jan 6, 2011
Wow thats so awesome daryn i can tell that really comess from the heart
darynscobee said
at 8:52 pm on Jan 6, 2011
Thanks,I really appriciate it. It's nice to have all my close friends saying all these nice things :D
rachelscobee said
at 10:39 am on Jan 6, 2011
Usted sabe mejor que nadie Daryn
darynscobee said
at 8:51 pm on Jan 6, 2011
I have positivley no idea what that says,but if I did,I'm sure I would be saying!!!!!!!! :D
sanjanascobee said
at 10:40 am on Jan 6, 2011
I know you're writing that from experience, Giggles... Your story REALLY came from your heart!
darynscobee said
at 8:50 pm on Jan 6, 2011
Thanks,Sanjana!!!! I know it may seem like I'm repeating the same thing ("wow that means so much to me") but I honestly mean it. Thanks sooooo much (again)!!!!!!!!
alexandriascobee said
at 10:41 am on Jan 6, 2011
Daryn, this has TONS of voice and one of the best poems I have ever read!
darynscobee said
at 8:47 pm on Jan 6, 2011
OMG Alex,your going to make me cry (Happy tears, happytears) those words mean more than you can imagine. You're a GREAT friend
June Shanahan said
at 10:44 am on Jan 6, 2011
I know better than to think 10 year olds do not have meaningful and deep thoughts, Giggles. Your words cut to the heart, and I mean that as a compliment.
darynscobee said
at 8:46 pm on Jan 6, 2011
Mrs.S,
Coming from you,that means so much. Writing these poems was the perfect way to express how I feel,when at first I couldn't figure out exactly what words could describe what I was going through. But this was the perfect opportunity to let what I was feeling be heard...or seen,considering it's on a computer screen hahahahahaha
June Shanahan said
at 3:43 pm on Jan 9, 2011
It's all because of Sharon Creech's gifted way of writing.
salvadorscobee said
at 10:49 am on Jan 6, 2011
que es triste Daryn
you know what i mean
darynscobee said
at 8:41 pm on Jan 6, 2011
Thank you so much,Sal!!!!! That one I know is Spanish...or at least I'm pretty sure hahaha thanks again!!!!!!! :D
rossscobee said
at 10:53 am on Jan 6, 2011
Impressionante, che è davvero grande
Awesome, That is really great
darynscobee said
at 8:40 pm on Jan 6, 2011
Thanks for the.....okay I don't know what language that is,but thanks anyway hahahahaha
galileascobee said
at 10:27 am on Jan 7, 2011
Daryn you put sooooooooo much voice into your poem and think of it like this
"your one heartbreak closer to the perfect match"
darynscobee said
at 10:30 am on Jan 7, 2011
Awwwww Thank you so much,G. That means the world to me. But I guess you're right. He just wasn't the one for me
tianascobee said
at 10:37 am on Jan 7, 2011
at first i thougt that was sharon creeth thats amazing thats how i feel. you let out a lot of your feelings.
darynscobee said
at 10:40 am on Jan 7, 2011
Awwww thank you!!!! Everyone is being so nice,caring and comforting about what happened. I really appriciate it. THANKS!!!!!
claudiascobee said
at 10:54 am on Jan 7, 2011
I love your poem soooooooooooo much it so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
darynscobee said
at 4:44 pm on Jan 7, 2011
Thanks,Winkie!!!!! (hahahahaha). Coming from you comforts and helps me so much more
darynscobee said
at 6:07 pm on Jan 7, 2011
I forgot the "that" it was supposed to say "coming from you,that comforts and helps me so much more" hahahahahaha typo
claudiascobee said
at 1:06 am on Jan 9, 2011
OMG!!!! I love how you changed it also I know it is kinda late but at like 1:00 pm can you call me PLEASE IT IS SUPER IMPORTENT(!!-=08@#$*%$&*(#$@%#%#%^*(&%$@!$^*())(*&^%#@!@%^*
That important
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