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Animal Poetry
(sample of an A)
Cougars
Ferocious, deadly, dangerous, carnivores,
Mother of cute little kittens,
Lover of MEAT, personal space, stalking prey, kittens,
Who feels happy when chasing rabbits,
Sad when poachers try to shoot at me,
Scared when a human approaches,
Who needs help adapting to new environments,
Who gives canine teeth to her prey, purrrrrrrs to her kittens, and hisses to her enemy,
Who fears bears, snakes, and guns,
Who dreams of escaping the zoo and living in the western part of North America,
Resident of north america, Canaca, and Mexico, and Florida.
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(sample of a LOW grade)
Cougars
Cougars are cool,
they're awesome
cool, cool, cool,
So awesome...
so nice
Pretty
Yahahhhhaaa! Yippee!
BioCube
All About A Scientist - Grade 100%
Linus Pauling
Intelligent, passionate, controversial, brave,
Husband of Ava,
Lover of quantum mechanics, molecular biology, and Vitamin C,
Who felt happy when accepting TWO Nobel Peace Prizes,
Sad when his wife died,
Scared with the development of nuclear weapons.
Who needed help getting his high school diploma, being a good daddy,
and curing his wife of cancer,
Who gave his friendship to Albert Einstein,
lectures to his college students, and hugs to his cat,
Who feared having to drop out of school and growing old,
Who dreamed of a world without war,
Former resident of Big Sur, California.
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Comments (Show all 49)
Sharoenah said
at 12:26 pm on Sep 19, 2009
Hi Mrs.Shanahan!
I miss you.
June Shanahan said
at 12:41 pm on Sep 19, 2009
I miss you too!!!!! Do you want to read a book with us?
Sharon Creech said
at 4:46 pm on Apr 1, 2010
I bet you are a Miss Stretchberry!
I wish I could comment on every student's poem. . .I've left a few notes, but please assure them all that I love what they're doing!
xx Your Author
Sharon Creech
caitlinscobee said
at 8:47 am on Sep 24, 2010
I loved the book Love that dog and Hate that cat. I love dogs and think cats are cute, but also mean.
noelscobee said
at 10:38 pm on Sep 10, 2010
You are the best teacher ever! i wish i didn't have to leave next year... -_- Also, is there a chance that we may get a class pet soon? we could use it to study biology and other subjects!
please tell every student that i love their poems i can't comment on all of them and i want them to know fast!
June Shanahan said
at 5:56 am on Sep 11, 2010
Noel, we'll have time in class to comment on poems. If you write a kind comment on somebody's poem, it makes them want to write a kind comment on YOURS as well. It makes us all closer as a Scobee Family. Noel, Noel, Noel, I wish I could tell you about the pet we will be getting for the classroom. Unfortunately, it is a SECRET!!!! Hint: scary, creepy, cool
noelscobee said
at 9:23 am on Sep 11, 2010
Cool!!! Also i was wondering if i could add a picture to the wiki and make a link on my page???
June Shanahan said
at 5:14 pm on Sep 12, 2010
Sure Noel, but do you know you have to upload the picture for the wiki? If you just copy and paste, it won't work. Also make sure the photo is not a close-up of just you because we are not allowed to upload photos of kids, for internet safety reasons.
galileascobee said
at 10:28 am on Sep 11, 2010
Dear Mrs.Wonderful Shanahan i learned how to make a link and i was wondering if i could make a link leading to a picture of James Maslow because most people don't know who he is and i would really like your Permission First
June Shanahan said
at 5:13 pm on Sep 12, 2010
Sure Gali, make the link as long as nothing is inappropriate. Preview it first, okay?
rossscobee said
at 8:33 am on Sep 13, 2010
I hate fire ants because they're bites "burn"!
caitlinscobee said
at 8:54 am on Sep 24, 2010
They are called FIRE ANTS!!!
June Shanahan said
at 8:19 pm on Sep 24, 2010
Good one, Caitlin!
alexandriascobee said
at 6:20 pm on Oct 13, 2010
LOL! :)
glynnis said
at 7:02 pm on Oct 10, 2010
Cats are not Skunks and Skunks are not Cats
Erin said
at 4:50 pm on Oct 14, 2010
You got that right!
alexandriascobee said
at 4:08 pm on Oct 13, 2010
Mrs. Shanahan, I think its so cool that we have the same earrings! Thanks for wearing them today!
June Shanahan said
at 7:13 pm on Oct 13, 2010
Those earrings are extra special to me because my oldest daughter gave them to me for Christmas one year. Tell me when you think we should wear them again. :-)
alexandriascobee said
at 8:09 pm on Oct 13, 2010
Sure thing! That was so sweet of your daughter to give you those earings! See you tomorrow!
Erin said
at 4:51 pm on Oct 14, 2010
How is Lindsey Mrs. Shanahan? How is Andrea? Have the kids met them yet?
June Shanahan said
at 5:06 am on Oct 15, 2010
I don't think the kids have met either one, but Lindsay will come to school someday and walk the perimeter of the room on her hands, like she does every single year. It's tradition. :-) Lindsay is Capt. of the cheer squad at A&M this year. She still looks like a fifth grader. :-)
Erin said
at 4:04 pm on Oct 15, 2010
Captain!?!?!? Wow! She must have worked very hard to get that position!
noelscobee said
at 9:01 pm on Oct 19, 2010
Mrs.Shanahan? may i please do my homework for recess because i think i accidently put it in my desk. i really want to keep my "E"! but if i find it i'll do it in the morning before school. but i really want to keep my "E" so i'll stay in for recess if thats alright for you if i don't find it.
June Shanahan said
at 5:12 am on Oct 20, 2010
No problem, Noel. You can probably do it and get 100% before the Launch bell rings, knowing you. :-)
noelscobee said
at 7:16 am on Oct 20, 2010
thank you Mrs.Shanahan!
alexandriascobee said
at 4:24 pm on Dec 13, 2010
Congratz, Mrs. Edcuator of The Year! You totally deserve it! I am SO SO SO happy for you!!!! Wooo-Hoo! ♥, Alex
June Shanahan said
at 8:33 pm on Dec 13, 2010
Do you have spies? How did you know? I thought I had a big secret, but YOU FOUND OUT!!!! Do you have the room bugged? Can you read my mind? How do you know everything before I even tell everybody?
claudiascobee said
at 6:58 pm on Jan 3, 2011
Hey Mrs.Shanahan I just have a request can we do more Lanuges Arts like writing?PLEASE!!!!!
Alex said
at 3:43 pm on Feb 26, 2011
Thats a awesome idea! I ♥ writing!
Erin said
at 5:46 pm on Apr 13, 2011
Oooh! A civil war personality huh? You guys studying the Civil War?
June Shanahan said
at 8:32 pm on Apr 14, 2011
Yes, who should I study?
Erin said
at 4:40 pm on Apr 18, 2011
I don't really know.
PinkieSpy (Noel) said
at 7:18 am on Apr 18, 2011
*pssst* you didn't hear it from me, but you should choose Jacob Shanahan, he wasn't well known, but he was the commander of squadron 6.
Alex said
at 6:52 pm on May 31, 2011
My mom and I prayed for you today. It wasn't the same at school without you. Everyone missed you! :-)
jacobscobee said
at 10:14 pm on Jan 9, 2012
hey mrs. shanahan can you show the class how much problems i did on study island
June Shanahan said
at 7:33 am on Jan 10, 2012
I will, but they had better be sitting down first. Otherwise, they will FAINT!!!! I'll show them today. How is middle school? Are you in charge of the whole school yet? Do you love it? Are you still brilliant in math? (Yes, of course. I already know the answer.)
jacobscobee said
at 8:42 pm on Jan 10, 2012
hi mrs. Shanahan middle school is greate but no i am not incharge yet and yes i am still greate at math. p.s. brian [ lego man ] says hi. me and [ lego man ] are in three school periods to gether, science, lunch and math.p.s. jonathan and david also say hi.
jacobscobee said
at 8:44 pm on Jan 10, 2012
p.s. check my voki.
jacobscobee said
at 8:45 pm on Jan 10, 2012
p.s. can you write my email and pasword to study island to me. bye
Jessica said
at 12:48 pm on Mar 24, 2012
I miss you so much, it's not the same going to school and you not being there.
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