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Poem 8

Page history last edited by June Shanahan 13 years, 9 months ago

 

 

"So much depends upon

 

shelter under a old tilting house,

 

providing coverage and safety

 

for an old hound kittens and a calico cat,

 

a home so much depends upon one.

 

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Comments (19)

Aaron Castro said

at 11:30 am on Jan 14, 2009

WHAT DOES IT MEAN!!!!!!!!!!!

Sean said

at 11:31 am on Jan 14, 2009

If I would put a song for that it would be what I'v done.

Christine Bonilla said

at 11:31 am on Jan 14, 2009

I agree! When I first my my glasses, my whole WORLD changed! I like the way you described the frames.

glynnis said

at 11:34 am on Jan 14, 2009

i dont understand

Barbara said

at 11:36 am on Jan 15, 2009

I agree as well!

Jessica said

at 11:40 am on Jan 15, 2009

It's true.

Alex said

at 11:40 am on Jan 15, 2009

COOL

June Shanahan said

at 7:30 am on Jan 17, 2009

Your poem really made my brain click into high gear. At first I didn't understand it, so I read it about three times slowly. Then, without warning, a big lightbulb flashed on in my brain! This is a poem only you could write, and it is so creative and wonderful! Every time I put my reading glasses on I will think about your words.

Samantha said

at 2:35 pm on Jan 20, 2009

I like your poem sence I have glasses.

Chris said

at 2:40 pm on Jan 20, 2009

Does your brother have glasses?

Emily said

at 5:19 pm on Jan 20, 2009

I also think glasses are important!

Aaron Gondensen said

at 11:29 am on Jan 21, 2009

Your poem makes make me wanting to wear glasses.

Ethan said

at 2:19 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I wonder what would have happen if there was NO TILTING HOUSE

Fabian said

at 2:20 pm on Dec 15, 2009

WOW! I don't know why erey is talking about glasses? But I think
that this is a good poem a shelter

Christina R said

at 2:20 pm on Dec 15, 2009

That is really good!

Barbara said

at 2:21 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I like it is so awesome!!

Chris said

at 2:23 pm on Dec 15, 2009

i like this poem because, my favorite character is ranger.

Alex said

at 2:24 pm on Dec 15, 2009

AMAZING!!

Nicole said

at 2:30 pm on Dec 15, 2009

Awsome poem! All about the book! So good! :)

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