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Poem 6

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Family Pictures

by:Alex G.

 

so much depends upon

a family picture

because

someone who has

lost

their memory, can

remember. 

 

Medicine

by:Alex G.

 so much depends upon

 medicine

 because

 someone who is dying

 might just be

 saved.

 

 

Friends

by:Alex G.

 

so much depends upon

a smile

because

that means a 

new

friendship might just be

growing.

 

Your Dream

by:Alex G. 

 

so much depends upon

your dream but 

you 

won't know how 

it 

feels until you

try.

 

 

The Underneath

 

So much depends upon an Underneath

Filled with happiness, and saddness,

a starving dog, filled with love,

and a cat filled with hope,

the Underneath is safe,

safe from the monster with his riffle

the monster is a man who lies and

 kills and skins whatever he finds

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments (22)

Jessica said

at 11:31 am on Jan 14, 2009

Sometimes friendships can't grow with a smile.

Kailene said

at 11:35 am on Jan 14, 2009

I love it

Christine Bonilla said

at 11:42 am on Jan 14, 2009

My favorite is still the family picture one, but they are all just amazing!

June Shanahan said

at 3:48 pm on Jan 14, 2009

The poem about the smile is my favorite, because it's so very true.

glynnis said

at 7:06 am on Jan 18, 2009

I LOVE IT!

Samantha said

at 2:31 pm on Jan 20, 2009

I realy love the poem about freindship.

Aaron Gondensen said

at 11:31 am on Jan 21, 2009

Your poem makes me want to take a picture.

Scobee said

at 3:11 pm on Jan 21, 2009

I love the Friends and Family Pictures and the Medicine poems! What great thoughts you have! What great images!
Mrs. Moecker, Scobee Librarian

Alex said

at 1:38 pm on Jan 22, 2009

Mine is amazing!

Alex said

at 1:54 pm on Jan 22, 2009

Wow thanks Mrs. Moeker your a good librarian! :)

Barbara said

at 1:55 pm on Jan 22, 2009

Your poem about Friends is so true!!

glynnis said

at 2:02 pm on Jan 22, 2009

So many good poems to read! Thank you for your time on these!

Chris said

at 2:32 pm on Jan 22, 2009

I like the medicne one.

Jessica said

at 11:20 am on Dec 14, 2009

Wow I love your poem and I love the part about Gar face.

Chris said

at 2:17 pm on Dec 15, 2009

that poem is so good...but true...

Sean said

at 2:19 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I like the part about the dog.

Alex said

at 2:20 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I LOVE my poem :P!

Samantha said

at 2:20 pm on Dec 15, 2009

AWWWWW I love it alex it is so awsome p.ss That's a long poem.

Nicole said

at 2:26 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I love it, it's all about the book! :)

Christina R said

at 2:30 pm on Dec 15, 2009

That is really good!!

Aaron G. said

at 2:33 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I like the The Underneath poem better it's good.

Paul said

at 2:34 pm on Dec 15, 2009

Both of them are smart

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