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Poem 5

Page history last edited by June Shanahan 14 years, 6 months ago

 

The Light Can Over Come Darkness

By: Kailene

 

so much

 depends upon

a flash light

a light of good

a light can

save people from the darkness.

 

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Comments (14)

Christine Bonilla said

at 11:41 am on Jan 14, 2009

Beautiful image!! I love it!

Chris said

at 11:33 am on Jan 15, 2009

thats realy very interesting!!!!!!!! :)

Chris said

at 11:35 am on Jan 15, 2009

I mean wooooooooooooooooooow!

Jessica said

at 11:38 am on Jan 15, 2009

A flashlight is important.

Alex said

at 11:39 am on Jan 15, 2009

A flashlight saves you from the darkness! Now you have light!

Samantha said

at 11:41 am on Jan 15, 2009

I love your poem it's like your gonna be a famous editor!

Sharoenah said

at 11:42 am on Jan 15, 2009

I love your poem it's one of my favorites.

June Shanahan said

at 7:34 am on Jan 17, 2009

You write like Kate DiCamillo. Amazing words, amazing thoughts.

Erin said

at 2:25 pm on Jan 20, 2009

I like how you used light in many different ways.

Samantha said

at 2:29 pm on Jan 20, 2009

That was realy good kailene.I love your title.

Aaron Gondensen said

at 11:33 am on Jan 21, 2009

I like the light can overcome darkness part.

Aaron Castro said

at 11:48 am on Jan 21, 2009

I like how you think.

Scobee said

at 3:09 pm on Jan 21, 2009

To me, this poem has a hidden meaning that you may or may not have thought about.
Mrs. Moecker, Librarian

Barbara said

at 1:51 pm on Jan 22, 2009

That is a really good poem!!

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