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Poem 4

Page history last edited by Chris 13 years, 6 months ago

By Chris C.

so much depends upon a unicycle because

it supports a clown from crashing down.

with every trip his feelings are ripped,

with every flick his heart is picked.

 

 

 

The Underneath

 

 

 

BY CHRIS C. 

so much depends upon a humming bird,with out the bird

the calico cat may have not conented with puck to tell him to keep his promise.

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Comments (15)

Jessica said

at 11:37 am on Jan 15, 2009

A clown does ride little bikes.

Barbara said

at 11:43 am on Jan 15, 2009

Interesting!!!

Emily said

at 11:46 am on Jan 15, 2009

good cricus riming

Erin said

at 12:13 pm on Jan 15, 2009

I like this poem.

Samantha said

at 2:27 pm on Jan 20, 2009

That was a great poem.ha

Aaron Castro said

at 2:33 pm on Jan 20, 2009

I like the end of your poem because it has alot of ryme.

You are not supost to tell why so much depends upon a unicycle.

you have to make them think of why so much depends upon a unicycle.

I still think its good.

June Shanahan said

at 6:58 pm on Jan 20, 2009

I like the way you editied your poem, changing "falling down" to "crashing down." Crashing is a better word choice. I like it, I like it.

Aaron Gondensen said

at 11:34 am on Jan 21, 2009

I like the unicycle part.

Ethan said

at 2:16 pm on Dec 15, 2009

that would have been terrible if there was NO HUMMING BIRD

Chris said

at 2:16 pm on Dec 15, 2009

haha i really like the humming bird......

Sean said

at 2:17 pm on Dec 15, 2009

That is probaly true.

Alex said

at 2:19 pm on Dec 15, 2009

The Hummingbird, she's a soul carrier....
Well I hope the Hummingbird doesn't go near Puck or Sabine! Ranger I hope he lives

Erin said

at 2:19 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I like your HummingBird poem.

Nicole said

at 2:23 pm on Dec 15, 2009

Your Humming Bird poem is so nice! :)

Aaron G. said

at 2:30 pm on Dec 15, 2009

The calico died when Puck was littler right?

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