so much depends
upon
a story
told over and over and over again
to practice
to study
to compete
the beginning of a talent
So much depends upon
a dog
that has a caring heart
who loves his cat family
who would do anything to brake his chain
he hopes Gar Face will leave and never come back
Ranger
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Comments (10)
June Shanahan said
at 9:36 am on Jan 15, 2009
I love your thoughts, and I am thrilled out of my socks that you are a part of our Wiki. Sometimes I pretend that you are in our class. :-) Are you going to read Love That Dog? If you do, make sure you have a box of kleenexes close by.
Barbara said
at 11:32 am on Jan 15, 2009
Your such a good poetry writer!!
Erin said
at 11:33 am on Jan 15, 2009
Your a great poet!!
Alex said
at 11:45 am on Jan 15, 2009
YOU ARE AWESOME AT POEMS!!!
glynnis said
at 12:14 pm on Jan 15, 2009
I like it!
Aaron G. said
at 2:25 pm on Jan 20, 2009
I like the story told over and over and over again.
glynnis said
at 2:07 pm on Jan 25, 2009
I love this story poem!
Samantha said
at 2:26 pm on Dec 15, 2009
Nicole I love it it is sweet and it's awsome and again I love it.
Fabian said
at 2:30 pm on Dec 15, 2009
It have a lot of voice.
Barbara said
at 2:31 pm on Dec 15, 2009
This is such a good poem.
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