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Poem 20

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by Paul 

Vanilla Shakes

 

so much depends

 

upon

 

a vanilla milkshake

 

so tasty frozen or not

 

it shall fill thy thirst.

 

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Comments (10)

Christine Bonilla said

at 11:40 am on Jan 14, 2009

I really think frozen was a better choice than moldy!

June Shanahan said

at 3:50 pm on Jan 14, 2009

You make me want to hop in my car RIGHT AWAY to speed through Dairy Queen drive through. However, I would order chocolate.

Anthony said

at 11:32 am on Jan 15, 2009

I like choclate more than vanilla. :(

Barbara said

at 11:32 am on Jan 15, 2009

You are so right!!

Jessica said

at 11:44 am on Jan 15, 2009

good!!!!!!!!!

Trey said

at 11:44 am on Jan 15, 2009

I like vanilla only

Aaron G. said

at 2:28 pm on Jan 20, 2009

I like Vanilla Shakes. Your poem makes me happy.

Tyler said

at 2:30 pm on Jan 22, 2009

ME WANT A MILKSHAKE!!!!!!!!!!! P.S. :o DDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tyler said

at 2:32 pm on Jan 22, 2009

I'm thirsty. WANT ANOTHER MILKSHAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sharon Creech said

at 3:42 pm on Apr 1, 2010

Yummmmmmm.
xx Your Author
Sharon Creech

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