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Poem 17

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Chewie 

by.Samantha

 

so much depends upon

 

a tan dog

 

with mud all over him

 

by a wet muddy puddle

 

PUCK

By.Samantha

 

So much depends upon

 

a grey calico kitten 

 

in a piney forest 

 

trying to get back home

 

RANGER

By.Samantha

 

So much depends upon

 

a dog that has a chain around his heart

 

stuck with a mean grumpy man

 

wishes he could get out of there

 

Garface

By.Samantha

 

So much depends upon

 

a realy mean man

 

who's only mean

 

because of his rotten dad

 

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Comments (8)

June Shanahan said

at 6:52 am on Jan 17, 2009

This is truly one of my favorites, because your words create such a powerful picture in my mind. Like you, I have a special place in my heart for dogs too. I wish I would have written this poem.

Erin said

at 2:13 pm on Jan 20, 2009

I can imagine a tan dog covered with mud.

Aaron Gondensen said

at 11:03 am on Jan 21, 2009

I like the tan dog covered with mud part.

Scobee said

at 2:55 pm on Jan 21, 2009

It's always a tan dog that gets the dirtiest!
Mrs. Moecker, Scobee Library

Samantha said

at 2:37 pm on Jan 22, 2009

I love your poem Samantha.

Erin said

at 11:15 am on Dec 14, 2009

I love your poems Samantha! Espiacally the ones about The Underneath. I wrote one about Ranger too. I was going to do Sabine and Puck but, I think I'm going to do Sabine, Puck, Grandmother Moccasin.

Christina R said

at 2:24 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I love the one about Ranger!!

Barbara said

at 2:25 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I like the one about Gar Face.

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