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Poem 15

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The Notebook

By Gilbert

 

 

So much depends on a notebook you mite get a idea and it will move out of your head the last thing you do is write it down you can use it on TASK writing test and get a 3 or a 4 and go to the fith grade  and do the same thing but get a new idea when your dad forgets somthing you could get your notebook tear the peice of paper out of your notebook and show it to him and you could save it to and if you have to do the same thing one day.

 

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Comments (8)

Chris said

at 11:25 am on Jan 15, 2009

Cool!

glynnis said

at 11:41 am on Jan 15, 2009

scince when do you call yourself gilbert,junior iknow it's your first name but every one calls you junior!

Kailene said

at 11:41 am on Jan 15, 2009

So cool.

June Shanahan said

at 6:48 am on Jan 17, 2009

Gilbert, I agree with you about how so much depends upon a notebook. When we read the next section of Love That Dog, we should all have our journals out, just in case an important idea pops into our heads. That way, we can capture our idea before it slips away! Do you agree? Your poem can help the whole class! Thanks!

glynnis said

at 2:22 pm on Jan 20, 2009

Your right, so much DOES depend on a notebook!

Aaron Gondensen said

at 11:08 am on Jan 21, 2009

I like the notebook part.

Aaron Gondensen said

at 2:25 pm on Jan 22, 2009

I was wondering, that is a great poem Junior. Don't let anyone click STEAL LOCK!! Because if they do, the whole poem will be gone forever.

Samantha said

at 2:33 pm on Jan 22, 2009

I like your poem.

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