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Poem 14

Page history last edited by Emily 14 years, 4 months ago

 

 

 

 

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A lonely and a loving blood hound

 

 

So much depends upon a dog with generous heart

 

And a love that fills your heart with hopes and dreams give him your best to

 

show him how much you care he loves and will give you his life for yours

 

 

 

 

The Evil and Our Safety

 

 

so much depends upon a house 

 

A lock that save from dark

 

And roof tops from shards of evil

 

that trees surround band protects from spirits and lets good come in ,but God will be the

 

One that’s

 

Watching over you and be inside you

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Comments (18)

Aaron Castro said

at 11:32 am on Jan 14, 2009

WHAT DOES IT MEAN!!!!!!!!!!!

Kailene said

at 11:32 am on Jan 14, 2009

i like it but a little to much evil i like it.

glynnis said

at 11:26 am on Jan 15, 2009

interesting

Erin said

at 11:27 am on Jan 15, 2009

I like it

Chris said

at 11:29 am on Jan 15, 2009

I like the house one and is the tree one a sepret poem?
p.s. I get both poems.

Emily said

at 11:39 am on Jan 15, 2009

I like my poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Alex said

at 11:43 am on Jan 15, 2009

what the heck does that mean!

June Shanahan said

at 6:42 am on Jan 17, 2009

Is the house YOUR house? Or could it be any of our houses? Your poem makes me feel like we are safe, as long as we are with our families where we are loved.

Aaron Gondensen said

at 11:13 am on Jan 21, 2009

I like a lock that safe from dark part.

glynnis said

at 2:01 pm on Jan 22, 2009

Such a good poem about a house keeping you safe from the outdoor evil!;-?

Samantha said

at 2:31 pm on Jan 22, 2009

I love the way you write. When I read the first sentance I had a picture in my mind already.

Christina R said

at 2:21 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I really like it!

Samantha said

at 2:23 pm on Dec 15, 2009

Emily Sniff, sniff It is the best I loooooove it.

Ethan said

at 2:23 pm on Dec 15, 2009

your all right about ranger XD

Tyler said

at 2:32 pm on Dec 15, 2009

The one about Ranger is incredible.

Trey said

at 2:37 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I like the one about The Evil and Our Saftey thee hee.

Cienna said

at 2:38 pm on Dec 15, 2009

U even mentioned God :*-)

glynnis said

at 12:43 pm on Feb 4, 2010

:)

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