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A lonely and a loving blood hound
So much depends upon a dog with generous heart
And a love that fills your heart with hopes and dreams give him your best to
show him how much you care he loves and will give you his life for yours
The Evil and Our Safety
so much depends upon a house
A lock that save from dark
And roof tops from shards of evil
that trees surround band protects from spirits and lets good come in ,but God will be the
One that’s
Watching over you and be inside you
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Comments (18)
Aaron Castro said
at 11:32 am on Jan 14, 2009
WHAT DOES IT MEAN!!!!!!!!!!!
Kailene said
at 11:32 am on Jan 14, 2009
i like it but a little to much evil i like it.
glynnis said
at 11:26 am on Jan 15, 2009
interesting
Erin said
at 11:27 am on Jan 15, 2009
I like it
Chris said
at 11:29 am on Jan 15, 2009
I like the house one and is the tree one a sepret poem?
p.s. I get both poems.
Emily said
at 11:39 am on Jan 15, 2009
I like my poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Alex said
at 11:43 am on Jan 15, 2009
what the heck does that mean!
June Shanahan said
at 6:42 am on Jan 17, 2009
Is the house YOUR house? Or could it be any of our houses? Your poem makes me feel like we are safe, as long as we are with our families where we are loved.
Aaron Gondensen said
at 11:13 am on Jan 21, 2009
I like a lock that safe from dark part.
glynnis said
at 2:01 pm on Jan 22, 2009
Such a good poem about a house keeping you safe from the outdoor evil!;-?
Samantha said
at 2:31 pm on Jan 22, 2009
I love the way you write. When I read the first sentance I had a picture in my mind already.
Christina R said
at 2:21 pm on Dec 15, 2009
I really like it!
Samantha said
at 2:23 pm on Dec 15, 2009
Emily Sniff, sniff It is the best I loooooove it.
Ethan said
at 2:23 pm on Dec 15, 2009
your all right about ranger XD
Tyler said
at 2:32 pm on Dec 15, 2009
The one about Ranger is incredible.
Trey said
at 2:37 pm on Dec 15, 2009
I like the one about The Evil and Our Saftey thee hee.
Cienna said
at 2:38 pm on Dec 15, 2009
U even mentioned God :*-)
glynnis said
at 12:43 pm on Feb 4, 2010
:)
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