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By Barbara

Three Minute Quizzes

 

so much depends upon

 

three minute quizzes

 

you have to remind yourself

 

you will pass

 

if don't pass you will 

 

have to study. 

 

By Barbara 

Family 

so much depends upon 

a family 

they keep special secrets that the world may never know

 

they feed you

 

buy you clothes

 

 

 

Alligator King

 

So Much depends upon

The Alligator King

 

The 100 ft. alligator that Gar Face wants

 

The one that Ranger's life depends on

 

The last one of his kind maybe.

 

Sabine

 

So Much depends upon

Sabine

 

Her shiny silver coat

 

the one who had to run away from the Underneath

 

Whose mom had died

 

 

Puck

 

So much depends upon

Puck

 

Who is lost in the Piney woods

 

Is lonely

 

and misses his mother so dearly

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments (26)

June Shanahan said

at 3:59 pm on Jan 14, 2009

Your words are always so powerful. I just love how you write.

Jessica said

at 11:34 am on Jan 15, 2009

Three minute Quizzez are awsome

Alex said

at 11:34 am on Jan 15, 2009

You write so awesome!

Chris said

at 11:41 am on Jan 15, 2009

This is a funny poem!

glynnis said

at 12:16 pm on Jan 15, 2009

your right about the three minute quizzes!

Erin said

at 2:16 pm on Jan 20, 2009

I love the way you write!

glynnis said

at 2:18 pm on Jan 20, 2009

Why are the 3 minute quizes so hard!

Samantha said

at 2:19 pm on Jan 20, 2009

I love the way you rote those poems.

Scobee said

at 11:26 am on Jan 21, 2009

I loved both your poems! Very creative!
Mrs. Moecker

Aaron Gondensen said

at 11:38 am on Jan 21, 2009

I like the three minute quizzes part.

Aaron Castro said

at 11:41 am on Jan 21, 2009

On the family poem you have two the's.

Barbara said

at 11:16 am on Dec 14, 2009

There it's fixed.

Alex said

at 1:40 pm on Jan 22, 2009

That does not matter Aaron Castro just think of how good it is!
That really is amazing Barbara!
you are a good friend!

glynnis said

at 2:04 pm on Jan 22, 2009

The three minute quizes BURN! They burn so badly!

Junior said

at 2:14 pm on Jan 22, 2009

I love your whole poem

Chris said

at 2:12 pm on Dec 15, 2009

i like the alligator king poem. I cant belive he is a 100ft!!!

Ethan said

at 2:13 pm on Dec 15, 2009

i love the puck poem =]

Alex said

at 2:14 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I like the alligator poem too, and I also like how in the Sabine and Puck poems you made the words silver!! :D

Barbara said

at 2:17 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I love my poems especially Alligator king one.

Samantha said

at 2:18 pm on Dec 15, 2009

barbara, Sniff, sniff Your poems are just so touching.

Anthony said

at 2:22 pm on Dec 15, 2009

You are so right about puck. :P

Paul said

at 2:22 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I miss the three minute quizes

Aaron C. said

at 2:23 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I cant beleve sabines mom died.

Aaron G. said

at 2:25 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I can't belive we don't do three minute quizzes anymore.

Nicole said

at 2:32 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I love your poems Barbara!:)

Sharon Creech said

at 3:37 pm on Apr 1, 2010

I love 'So much depends upon. . .' poems...and these are great examples!
xx Your Author
Sharon Creech

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